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Wandering Word's avatar

The first portion of this chapter describing their consciousness being transfered is so visceral. It reminded me of the deep nerve pain of getting a filling with not enough anesthesia and it made it all the more uncomfortable. Bravo!

Cal C Long's avatar

The jarring nature of having your consciousness plunged into a virtual world was well described. Lots of intrigue built with the error messages, ghostly words and unexpected locations. I’m a sucker for deadly academies.

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