I’m completely new to this genre, but find it very engaging and written so I can see and experience this different world. I would never ever come up with something like this. It’s literally a completely different world. The cliffhangers at the end of each chapter are great for wanting to learn what’s next. The story is constantly moving forward, never boring or static, and Rosie is a great character.
Thank you so much, Helene! That means a lot, especially hearing that the world feels vivid and engaging even though the genre is new to you. I’m so glad Rosie is working for you as a character and I love that the cliffhangers are doing their job! 😅 I’m editing and changing a lot as I post. Hope it continues moving forward smoothly 😬
Thanks! I’m glad you’re enjoying her 😅 she is a fun one to write. I revised this chapter recently. I’m receptive to critique if there’s any feedback or suggestions you have for me. 🤍 I appreciate you following along.
I do have one thing, but it’s not really a critique, more like impatience 😆 I’m curious about what’s happening in real life: have they figured out the mistake, or was everything actually meant to unfold this way in the virtual world? But that’s up to you, and it’s perfectly fine if it’s revealed at the end of the story 😊
I’m completely new to this genre, but find it very engaging and written so I can see and experience this different world. I would never ever come up with something like this. It’s literally a completely different world. The cliffhangers at the end of each chapter are great for wanting to learn what’s next. The story is constantly moving forward, never boring or static, and Rosie is a great character.
Thank you so much, Helene! That means a lot, especially hearing that the world feels vivid and engaging even though the genre is new to you. I’m so glad Rosie is working for you as a character and I love that the cliffhangers are doing their job! 😅 I’m editing and changing a lot as I post. Hope it continues moving forward smoothly 😬
I’ll read this in bed tonight. Looking forward!
Great, I like how you naturally leave room for the story to branch out! Rosie has a charming sense of humor 😆
Thanks! I’m glad you’re enjoying her 😅 she is a fun one to write. I revised this chapter recently. I’m receptive to critique if there’s any feedback or suggestions you have for me. 🤍 I appreciate you following along.
I do have one thing, but it’s not really a critique, more like impatience 😆 I’m curious about what’s happening in real life: have they figured out the mistake, or was everything actually meant to unfold this way in the virtual world? But that’s up to you, and it’s perfectly fine if it’s revealed at the end of the story 😊
All will be revealed 🔮… at some point haha. I promise. I understand the impatience though. Hopefully it’s not too annoying 🥴
It’s not annoying, it’s actually good for readers because it keeps pulling them forward through the story 😆
😅 😅 😅